I pick Kosher Nazi's essay the winner.

However, there are some caveats re the contest in general, addressed in my next post.

Problems:

1) Essays are better for magazines than newspapers.

2) There is no way -- and until you've done some layout, you can't fully appreciate this -- to emphasize how little room there is in a newspaper if you use normal size type and any illustrations. Meaning,

3) None of these essays could be printed in 1/4 page.

4) In that small a space, you have enough room for a handful of paragraph-points (see the ADL back cover article in TAA#3)

5) So, Kosher Nazi's comes closer to what I think is best than the others.
KN's needs editing, though, to fit the space. More on this in a minute.

6) Anytime we accept the enemies frame, we have to be extremely careful. This is why on Goyfire I call us the "good guys" - because the jews are always calling us haters. So if we start writing themes on why we hate jews, we're accepting their terms, that we are haters.

That may be acceptable, but if we're going to take on that big of a burden, then we better have an extremely strong reason for feeling that way. And that reason needs to be made personal and direct. These essays all approach the subject a little too college-y. That is, academic and abstract.

This is a newspaper aimed at general readership. Think USA Today - short, punchy. What do our reasons for "hating" the jews mean to the reader? Should he hate jews? He probably doesn't want to hate anybody. So, why?

Now, the writers all have valid reasons, the question is which is the best FORM to express those reasons. I say it's too abstract to say simply "race-mixing." Tv shows race-mixing all the time. The thing in itself, as the guy picking up our paper may believe, brainwashed or not, isn't necessarily horrifying. Therefore the right way to do it is focus on race-mixing's effects on DESTROYING WHITE FAMILIES.

We hate jews because they DESTROY WHITE FAMILIES. They destroy OUR FAMILIES. They teach the stinking, infected, violent stupid nigger to prey on our daughters. They create lies about WMD and send our sons to die in IRAQ.

They run the collection of white families formerly called the American nation by opening our borders to MEXICO, against the will of the American people as expressed in polls time after time after time.

So, I would pull 4-5 points from Kosher Nazi's paper, and probably leave out the Fed Reserve because although inflating money (silently stealing from whites) is one of the worst things they do, it involves too much background and too many links to bring it to life, and risks turning off the reader. Get him to our websites and then he can learn the rest. Focus on the immediate threat to his family. People, even white veal, go absolute stinking nuts livid murderous when their kids are threatened. If you have one, you know. See that guy up in Connecticut who just knifed his neighbor for MAYBE molesting his kid. So, we want to pull these deepest, innermost feelings out of the newbie readers, and that is most likely to happen by portrarying as succinctly and face-punchingly the visceral threat posed by the vicious jews through the disgusting, destructive coloreds they've been siccing on us for decades.

These two paragraphs are too long for a paper, truly, but they're what make Kosher Nazi's essay the winner. They are close to publishable as-is, IMO.

The Jew uses every opportunity on TV News, dramas, sitcoms, Hollywood movies and especially advertising to push the racial equality message. Notice the large and disproportionate number of Blacks on TV. Notice the number of situations where they partner a Black male with a White female. Witness the ever-present multicultural images we see each day. Always you will find the Black male/White female combo. Many other times you will see an Asian face and/or a gay, all being sold to you as though this is completely normal. White men are presented as being stupid, fat, ineffectual and generally unfit for survival.

After media imagery, they hit you with Immigration. They work very hard to both mentally train you to mix your White blood with that of other races and they also supply the aliens for you to mix with, once your programming is complete. We have the Jewish Senator Jacob Javitz to thank for pushing through the 1965 Immigration Act. Before that, it was rare to see anything other than the majority White population and a small percentage of Blacks. Now you can’t swing a dead cat at your local mall or Wal-Mart without hitting scores of Asians, Mexicans and Indians.

We have to start, IN THE PAPER, where the reader is. Meet him there and bring him back to the true path, a la the Jesuits. Start with something he knows, then get him to see it in a different way. He sees the race mixing and white-male-as-doof daily on tv. Lou Dobbs has primed him to wonder about the mexican border. KN helps him see those false-framed but REAL issues in a new light. He reframes them from our WN perspective in a way that may click on a few light bulbs. That, really, along wtih our urls, is about the best a paper can do. There just isn't much room, either in the paper or the brain of the average guy picking the paper up.

Rather than writing academically, ie, objectively, "one"-style, the paper should talk to the reader directly, using YOU, and being short and informal, but NEVER misspelling and ALWAYS getting facts right. Use a FEW memorable facts, as MANY memorable illustrations as can be found - put the information in the form that conveys it quickest and deepest, is what I was taught. Don't use words where a picture or graph will do better.

Congrats to the winner - Kosher Nazi!

Great essay! :cheers:

I'll just have to work on conveying my appreciation for these delightful humanitarians better
(hope its the last time I'm out-jewed!)

Pointers duly noted, Alex. Thanks for your consideration.

Hail (Kosher) Nazi! :cheers:

Hail Kosher Nazi. Good job! Keep up the Good Work.

Alex,

Kosher Nazi accepts the win with pleasure from the grave. He was killed under mysterious circumstances only a fortnight ago. KN sends his Kudos to the other fine contestants.

I'll shorten the essay and repost, assuming there is still time before going to print. I don't mind chopping it down again. Density creates value, in my opinion.

Side note: Enjoyed your show with the 'girly-men' from LA. We have a similar pair that does the morning drive brainwashing here in the ATL. Either one or both of them are Jews. They were 'fired' once when there was a shakeup on all the FM stations here, but they came back shortly thereafter. 'The Regular Guys' is their handle. They do the usual subversive Stern-like delivery all morning long.

Rounder,

You should have my address on file for that signed book; I'm looking forward to it. I'd also like a free bonus of 100 TWPL #2 papers to distribute, since the project is in the black.

Sincerely,

The Ghost of KN:cheers:

Alex,

Kosher Nazi accepts the win with pleasure from the grave. He was killed under mysterious circumstances only a fortnight ago. KN sends his Kudos to the other fine contestants.

I'll shorten the essay and repost, assuming there is still time before going to print. I don't mind chopping it down again. Density creates value, in my opinion.

Side note: Enjoyed your show with the 'girly-men' from LA. We have a similar pair that does the morning drive brainwashing here in the ATL. Either one or both of them are Jews. They were 'fired' once when there was a shakeup on all the FM stations here, but they came back shortly thereafter. 'The Regular Guys' is their handle. They do the usual subversive Stern-like delivery all morning long.

Rounder,

You should have my address on file for that signed book]

Congratulations on the win, Kosher Nazi. PM me an address. I seem to have lost it. And I'll get the book in today's mail. I'm out of TWPL-1, but will send you 100 free TWPL-2 when printed.

Repost your article quickly, if you can. OK ?? Time's running out.

Thanks Alex for sharing your brilliant insights. Excellent "food for thought" for us all.

And also, thanks go out to all contestants, for their outstanding efforts in helping make the contest highly competitive.

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Alex,

Is this short enough yet? I can cut out more and continue to compress this, but perhaps your deadline has hit. Either way, I look forward to reading and distributing TWPL #2.

Why We Hate Jews and Why You Should, Too!
by The Kosher Nazi
8/21/2006

I. Communism is Jewish!

What an astounding proclamation that is. I remember the day I discovered this]the Kabballistic religion is the one that houses the idea of the Jewish leaders as being the saviors of the 'Proletariat'.

During the Red October / Bolshevik Revolution in Russia in 1917, Jews openly formed the Bolshevik party and constituted the majority of its members. After a few early, failed attempts, the Jewish Bolsheviks finally succeeded in overthrowing the Russian monarchist, Czar Nicholas. Bolshevik secret police disposed of the royal family by means of bayonetting them to death in the basement of their Winter Palace.

What followed is one of history’s most vile and corrupt governments, ever. The killing sprees of the Jewish Bolsheviks far outdid anything witnessed in the French Revolution, not to mention Hitler's Germany. Millions were murdered and dispossessed of their land. Ukrainian farmers had their grain stolen and were left to starve. Christian Kossaks were tortured and killed. The intelligentsia were dragged from their homes at night, taken to the edge of town, and shot in the back of the head. No one lifted a finger against these Communist Jews.

The Jews will tell you that Communism was invented by Marx. They will tell you that he was a German. In reality, the author of The Communist Manifesto, Marx, was a Jew and yet another son of a Rabbi. His real name is Mordechai Levi. Examine the 10 planks of the Communist Party in his book and you will see that the U.S. is effectively Communist. We have a Central Bank. We have an Income Tax. We have universal primary education. We have a central, federalized government. They just haven’t bothered to change the name on the sign out front to The People’s Republic of America.

Just as Jews deny the validity of The Protocols of the Elders of Zion, they also roundly deny virtually every other accusation hurled against them. They say that there are so many conspiracies attributed to them, that they cannot be true. I say that where there is smoke, there is fire, and the Jews have caused a lot of smoke in their time here on earth.

Marxist Jews were numerous in Germany during Adolf Hitler’s time and we have him to thank for exposing and defining this massive conspiracy. Detractors uniformly point to the Holohoax as proof of Hitler's evil, yet serious investigative journalism of this event reveals quite a different story.

II. Race-Mixing is Jewish!

Once you understand that the Jews are a race that thrives on its Supremacist doctrine, it naturally follows that every other race is their enemy. Henry Ford and others have referred to them as a Parasitic race, because they can only survive in foreign lands, sucking the life force from their host, living off of the labor of others. Were they to all be confined to Israel, their system would likely collapse. You can’t cheat people that are in on the scam.

Since all other races are their enemy, how best to attack them? Race-mixing is the main weapon for this objective. Because they know that the White Race was the only race to ever stand up to them, most race-mixing efforts will naturally be directed at degenerating our race first.

The Jew uses every opportunity on TV News, dramas, sitcoms, Hollywood movies and especially advertising to push the racial/sexual equality message:

* Dr. Phil parades neutered White males in front of female audiences, admonishing them for their failure to adhere to female standards.

* Notice the number of situations where Advertisers partner a Black male with a White female.

* White men are presented in the Jewish media as being stupid, fat, ineffectual, cowardly and generally unfit for survival.

After media imagery, they hit you with Immigration. They work very hard to both mentally train you to mix your White blood with that of other races and they also supply the aliens for you to mix with, once your programming is complete.

* Does your local sheriff even bother to round up the illegal Mexicans loitering around your town, looking for a day labor job? Mine was 'offended' when I recently asked him about it. He said we need to be 'sensitive to the HISPANIC Community'. They don't seem to be so sensitive with Me, when I encounter them.

They take our jobs, they spoil our neighborhoods and they commit crimes against us. And notice that the Jew does not limit the immigration to anyone that would compete in their industries. They don’t limit immigrants to doctors and lawyers, actors and bankers. No, they only let in the scum, the uneducated, the criminal, the lazy and never is there any requirement that they speak English.

If the Jews continue with their plan, there will be only two races left, the Jews and the Proletariat. The future of the world, if there is to be one, other than despotic Communist rulers slashing and burning their way across the countryside at will, lies with the White Man.

Conclusion:

Jews are subversive. Therefore we must be subversive. Jews are racists, therefore we must be racists. Jews show no mercy to their enemies, therefore we must show no mercy to our enemies.

Further reading:
The Communist Manifesto, Karl Marx (aka Mordechai Levi)
The International Jew, Henry Ford
Mein Kampf, Adolf Hitler
The Protocols of the Elders of Zion, Unknown
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Thanks for the quick re-posting. It'll definately appear in TWPL-2.

Excellent job.

Rather than writing academically, ie, objectively, "one"-style, the paper should talk to the reader directly, using YOU, and being short and informal, but NEVER misspelling and ALWAYS getting facts right. Use a FEW memorable facts, as MANY memorable illustrations as can be found - put the information in the form that conveys it quickest and deepest, is what I was taught. Don't use words where a picture or graph will do better.

My comments here have nothing to do with my submitted essay. I'm speaking generally -- of what is best for this newspaper.

You're the expert, of course, Alex. But the reason I don't like reading newspapers -- besides the jew propaganda slant -- is they are written to 10 year olds. The articles are incoherent, superficial, and difficult to read because of the incoherence.

I would imagine that journalism schools and jew newspapers are designed by jews who have an innate contempt for their readers -- White people. The jews are wrong again. White people are smarter than they think.

Our "customers" will be a very wide mix of folks -- some average joes, others intellectuals. For that reason, I think a White newspaper is a good place for at least a few essays -- because essays convey more thought, more knowledge. This newspaper may be the only chance in quite a while for these White readers to get woken up. So, personally, I think there should be a mix. Short hard hitting articles; deeper, well-written, well-thought out essays.

That's my opinion anyway.